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The Story of The Stolen Bite of Peach (in six lines)


A king was given a peach from the gods, to make him live 9,000 years.

while the peach was being brought to him, a man grabbed it and took a bite.

the king was worried that he would not live 9,000 years

he ate the rest of the peach.

he was killed in a battle at his castle the very next year.

the morale is that even eternal life can not keep you from being killed.


  1. I have always wondered what would happen if somebody killed an imortal person.
    Also that king is Over 9000.

  2. Hey, I’m Jenna. I’m a 13-year-old in Pennsylvania. I think your characters are interesting you are very creative.

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